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I liked the lyrics; very well put, you didnt rush them too much, you STAYED ON TOPIC (which seems to be impossible these days- everyone wants to be Lil' Wayne >.<) The beat was a different variety, kinda reflected the whole childhood theme of the song, though i felt like it was a little too happy for the subject matter. All in all- good work.

viewtifulday responds:

Thanks man.
And yeah, I wasn't exactly sure about the direction I was taking with the beat, but this is what I came up with, haha

like u said

its not as good as ur others, but it could get better. it just seems a little too empty, i cant put my finger on it right now but ill figure it out sooner or later

l love it

but watch that bass... but other than that, u could leave it as is and itl be great. keep it up

i agree with them

very relaxing, and the transitions and layering is perfect. keep it up

wow

this is flawless... this is where i hope to get with my own. thx for the motivation

tankbusta responds:

yes im sure you will...listen to my earlier stuff and how i worked at it

dedication is all you need

i like..

but tone down those cymbals a little, they kinda distract u from rest of it.

i like it but something seems to be missing

i think its the drums. they sound a lil hollow. other than that i love it.

Manamaniac responds:

My thoughts exactly to be honest, thinking back on it i don't think i put in much of a bass part. After listening to it more I think I"m starting to regret that ^^

anyway thanx for the review!

just fall short of being radio worthy

Yea I agree with sunsetteam. if thats really your vocals then you have a LOT of potential. though you should watch the tempo of the beat because it seemed u kinda rushed the vocals to fit the timing. other than that its great :)

kenubo responds:

Yeah that's me singing. I'm still an amateur when it comes to recording, but I think I'm getting better little by little. lol.

Thanks a lot for the awesome review!

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